我爸爸，我想对你说：爸爸，你上班很累，有时候我没做完作业，你还陪着我做作业。爸爸，你虽然不喝酒抽烟，这样很好，但是你容易生气，你一生气，我就很害怕。
My father, I want to say to you: Dad, you are very tired at work. Sometimes I haven't finished my homework, and you accompany me to do my homework. Dad, it's good that you don't drink or smoke, but you are easily angry. When you are angry, I'm afraid.
爸爸，我想对你说：我希望您改一改这个习惯，虽然你自己不在意，但是，别人很在意的。爸爸，请你不要在我做作业的时候教我，如果你不出声，静悄悄的话，我肯定很快就做完的。
Dad, I want to say to you: I hope you change this habit. Although you don't care about it yourself, others do. Dad, please don't teach me when I do my homework. If you are silent, I will finish it soon.
爸爸，我会好好学习，不辜负您的期望。
Dad, I will study hard and live up to your expectations.